Sunday, September 30, 2012

Le Voyage dans la lune (1902)

Le Voyage Dans La Lune (1902)

1 comment:

  1. Hi Akinbiyi,

    Well done! A sincere, considered precis - and you've wrestled with much success the rules and regs of academic conventions. A few observations to make however - 1) the Harvard citation is the surname + date, so not (Tyson James Yates, 2012) but just (Yates, 2012). Also - avoid mixing fonts; I'd suggest just italicising your base font for your quotations as opposed to installing that hand-written font. In terms of images, consider just centralising them, with the paragraphs above and below, because right now you've got a slightly fragmentary look - with the non-standard alignment of images and different fonts.

    More generally, this is very encouraging, so job well done :)