excellent stuff! Can be easy to fall behind on these but it makes writing essays a lot easier because you'll be adapted to using the right terminology :) This film ruined Tim Burton for me... twas a sad day :(Just make sure to have a look on the myuca site about harvard referencing for your quotes and images. Bit confusing at first but its how the uni likes it to be done.
I'll have a look at the Harvard referencing again, and Tim Burton...why? was it his Edward scissorhands?
I'll echo what Sammy said - great review! Good use of quotes, It's great your incorporating them into the text and using them to further fuel some reflective discussion of the film. Nice one!