Friday, November 16, 2012

Secret Lair OGR


  1. OGR 16/11/2012

    Hi Akinbiyi,

    Okay - so we've got some gaps here and an incomplete final concept painting - which is looking promising. No character profile either, though it's clear from our own conversations and your hero prop document that you've been giving your character a lot of thought. I like the idea of the Terracotta soldier as the hero prop, though it does feel to me as if it should have some additional significance - i.e. that it might symbolise for the thief an imbalance of power he's trying to address?

    There's not too much more I can react to here, Akinbiyi - which is a shame. That said, I know you're working hard on this project, but I think your blog needs to buzz a bit more - more traffic, more posts, more proactive seeking of feedback etc.

  2. thanks for the feedback, I had the character profile..but I forgot to include it on the OGR, I'll take what you said about the Terracotta Soldier and try and make it more significant to the character, before I post the final Character profile